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The spiralling fumes rose up past his face, the little torrents of turbulence tickling his skin as they went. This was his last hope. Severus had noticed the way she looked at him the previous week - Potter had been soaking wet from both sweat and rain, but he held the Quidditch cup aloft like a gorgon's head, the butterbeer his lackeys had poured into it sloshing over the sides and wetting him even further.

In the present, his lips curved into a perfect facsimile of the sneer he had awarded the scene. He had turned back to Evans to finalize their study schedule for their Potions project, only to catch the faintest of smiles playing around the corners of her mouth.

He had then left, doubting she would notice or care about his absence.

The plan had slowly formed in his mind over the subsequent days. She needed to be saved from Potter... she needed something better... she needed him. But first... she needed to realize that.

He inhaled deeply of the vapours rising from the cauldron. Rain... cedar, like that clinging to a blanket after long storage... a delicate curl of magno-

"What are you up to?"

He jumped slightly. His eyes snapped open - he hadn't even realized he'd closed them. "Slughorn said I could practice," he blurted, a bit too quickly.

Evans leaned in over the steaming potion, her arm just brushing against his, the barest hint of magnolia teasing his senses at these close quarters.

"Mmm... that smells divine."

He couldn't help himself. "What do you smell?"

Her eyelids had drifted down, and fluttered faintly as she inhaled again, her lips parted slightly. "I smell... rain..." Severus' heart clenched, "and... leather..." he frowned, "and... and..."

"Yes?" he prompted.

She giggled, shaking her head. "And butterbeer of all things! How strange is that?"

"Evanesco," he muttered, banishing the shimmering potion. "This batch is all wrong."

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Phew... my entry for the Amortentia Showdown. This was a doozy to do! So tricky in fact, that I had to call in JimX's help once again. My endless gratitude, admiration and affection go out to that selfless man. :heart:

Lily Evans and Severus Snape are the intelectual property of J.K. Rowling, who seems set on making Severus' youth a truly miserable one. *grumps*

PS Any mention/criticism of shipping will be soundly ignored, because, honestly, I can't be arsed about fandom/shipping politics. :)

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:iconcellancoly:
poor severus. she's such a tease

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XD omg!!! that,s the best!!!!!*goes to sleep* hmmm...I smel...SEVERUS XD :giggle: bhaahaha poor SEv, Lily just didn't realize she ;loved Severus yet...:no: *sighs* XD
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Awwwwww, Poor little Sevvie....

He should have smelled Rain and vanilla...I always use warm vanilla sugar bath gel. Vanilla is much nicer anyway.

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Nah, just a classic case of one person loving someone who doesn't love them back. Not mean, just... the way things are. Thanks for the Fav! :)

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I don't think she loved/loves him at all - well, no more than a friend anyway. The Amortentia confirmed this for him - she loves James. Severus is mature enough to recognize this. :nod: Thanks for the Fav, sweetstuff. :)

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Aww, poor Sevvie... :petting:
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Methinks vanilla is too sweet for Severus. :) He is not a sweet man.

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Indeed... but at least he knows a lost cause when he sees it.

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"This batch is all wrong." Har, the poor boy. ^^; I did that a few times in my chemistry class. He needs to try a love potion instead. :)

I like the story that goes along with it. :) I can so see something like that happening.

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Stunning job on this one. It's really artistic the way you did you silhouettes and the rain, it adds a very emotive and beautiful element. I think this has to be one of the hottest snapes EVER *stares some more* Defiantly some of the best work I have seen you do, I'm very impressed. :+fav:

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